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I'm not even supposed to be here! ([identity profile] zoethe.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] greybeta 2005-12-20 03:01 pm (UTC)

Ferrett refers to "The Slurpee Syndrome." Remember that your writing is competing with every distraction in the world. Every minute, you are trying to keep the reader from thinking, "you know, I could really go for a Slurpee" and abandoning your words.

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