My next Collegian article
Sep. 28th, 2004 01:09 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
greybetaWhen I said anyone reading my journal would help me become a better writer, I wasn't joking. I'm going to start posting my college newspaper articles a few days in advance. In order for me to become a better writer, please comment on any grammatical mistakes or rewording you think I should do. I'd also like to know of any disagreements you have with what I write. I'd like to improve my writing in both style and content.
Also, as a big favor for me, please comment by late Wednesday night (I'd say around ten or eleven oclock CST). I usually send off my articles late that night.
I know everyone's tired about hearing about the election, but it's a hot topic right now. I apologize for the mediocrity of my writing. I also apologize that I don't say anything new, for I believe in trying to restate the situation in my own words.
The Problem with Mudslinging
Daniel Tu
When you seriously consider Bush’s platform, you will notice one constant. A date from three years ago keeps popping up in Bush’s rhetoric. He will tell you how well he’s managed the nation since that traumatic event. Terrorists threaten America’s freedom everywhere, yet America stands proud and strong. And it’s because the Republicans have been at the helm.
That’s some bull. Let’s dissect President Bush’s policies, starting with his domestic policies. Specifically, let’s talk about No Child Left Behind, an educational program quantifying education through tests. A school must continually improve its test scores to move up in the program. However, standardized tests are notorious for inaccurately predicting a child’s success. They may be right ninety percent of the time, but that still leaves the other ten percent to suffer.
On economic policies, Bush advocates tax cuts. He notably pushes for these tax cuts when America is fighting a war in two countries. That’s like maxing out your credit card on a plasma screen TV and then borrowing money to go out on a Caribbean cruise. Unlike most average Americans, however, the U.S. government can borrow all the money it wants to pay for its programs. Our national debt balloons while Bush wages his anti-terror campaign.
Bush hopes that the upcoming presidential election will be a referendum on foreign policy. In his political speeches, he hammers home the point that America got a rid of an evil named Saddam Hussein. While I fully support our endeavors to free people from tyranny, I remember the reason we sent troops to Iraq was because we thought they had weapons of mass destruction. As soon as the possibility of not finding those weapons surfaced, Bush began to reason that we did so out of humanitarian reasons. Those reasons would include giving contracts to Haliburton. If America truly considered tyranny a problem in today’s world, we would mobilize troops in Africa. We do not do so because we will not monetarily profit from it.
Bush’s strong Christian overtones draw the support of social conservatives across the nation. For example, the GOP admits to printing pamphlets in Arkansas warning that liberals would ban the Bible. Bush comes out strongly in favor of a constitutional amendment against gay marriage where a drastic measure like an amendment is not required. He could be rational and support civil unions, but he’s too afraid of alienating the far right.
Having considered this, the Democrats should have run away with this election. They have not because their presidential candidate Kerry has refused to sway from his anti-Bush plan. Take the hint, Senator, and stop mudslinging with Bush. The more negative ads appear on television, the more voters will avoid the election. This falls into the Republicans’ hands because people will then think there’s no difference between the candidates.
Many swing voters would be interested in Kerry’s policies if he focused on them more. More specifically, if the media paid attention more to Kerry’s policies rather than his responses to Bush, we might actually get to know the man. Instead, we get all sorts of political experts painting a picture of the man. Once Senator Kerry stands up for himself, Bush is doomed.
The Bush campaign banks on the fact that Kerry won’t make such a bold move. The Republicans attack Kerry knowing they will invoke a response, one that will further the negativity of this election season. The Democrats defend Kerry believing they must return fire, following the adage that turnabout is fair play. In the end, many conservatives will feel the same pain voting for Bush that many liberals will feel when voting for Kerry.
Also, as a big favor for me, please comment by late Wednesday night (I'd say around ten or eleven oclock CST). I usually send off my articles late that night.
I know everyone's tired about hearing about the election, but it's a hot topic right now. I apologize for the mediocrity of my writing. I also apologize that I don't say anything new, for I believe in trying to restate the situation in my own words.
The Problem with Mudslinging
Daniel Tu
When you seriously consider Bush’s platform, you will notice one constant. A date from three years ago keeps popping up in Bush’s rhetoric. He will tell you how well he’s managed the nation since that traumatic event. Terrorists threaten America’s freedom everywhere, yet America stands proud and strong. And it’s because the Republicans have been at the helm.
That’s some bull. Let’s dissect President Bush’s policies, starting with his domestic policies. Specifically, let’s talk about No Child Left Behind, an educational program quantifying education through tests. A school must continually improve its test scores to move up in the program. However, standardized tests are notorious for inaccurately predicting a child’s success. They may be right ninety percent of the time, but that still leaves the other ten percent to suffer.
On economic policies, Bush advocates tax cuts. He notably pushes for these tax cuts when America is fighting a war in two countries. That’s like maxing out your credit card on a plasma screen TV and then borrowing money to go out on a Caribbean cruise. Unlike most average Americans, however, the U.S. government can borrow all the money it wants to pay for its programs. Our national debt balloons while Bush wages his anti-terror campaign.
Bush hopes that the upcoming presidential election will be a referendum on foreign policy. In his political speeches, he hammers home the point that America got a rid of an evil named Saddam Hussein. While I fully support our endeavors to free people from tyranny, I remember the reason we sent troops to Iraq was because we thought they had weapons of mass destruction. As soon as the possibility of not finding those weapons surfaced, Bush began to reason that we did so out of humanitarian reasons. Those reasons would include giving contracts to Haliburton. If America truly considered tyranny a problem in today’s world, we would mobilize troops in Africa. We do not do so because we will not monetarily profit from it.
Bush’s strong Christian overtones draw the support of social conservatives across the nation. For example, the GOP admits to printing pamphlets in Arkansas warning that liberals would ban the Bible. Bush comes out strongly in favor of a constitutional amendment against gay marriage where a drastic measure like an amendment is not required. He could be rational and support civil unions, but he’s too afraid of alienating the far right.
Having considered this, the Democrats should have run away with this election. They have not because their presidential candidate Kerry has refused to sway from his anti-Bush plan. Take the hint, Senator, and stop mudslinging with Bush. The more negative ads appear on television, the more voters will avoid the election. This falls into the Republicans’ hands because people will then think there’s no difference between the candidates.
Many swing voters would be interested in Kerry’s policies if he focused on them more. More specifically, if the media paid attention more to Kerry’s policies rather than his responses to Bush, we might actually get to know the man. Instead, we get all sorts of political experts painting a picture of the man. Once Senator Kerry stands up for himself, Bush is doomed.
The Bush campaign banks on the fact that Kerry won’t make such a bold move. The Republicans attack Kerry knowing they will invoke a response, one that will further the negativity of this election season. The Democrats defend Kerry believing they must return fire, following the adage that turnabout is fair play. In the end, many conservatives will feel the same pain voting for Bush that many liberals will feel when voting for Kerry.
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Date: 2004-09-28 12:03 pm (UTC)You're right, I tend to ramble. Like any good history major, I tend to digress from the topic at hand. Next time, I will zero in on a topic (unfortunately, I've got a 1500 word essay due tomorrow plus two tests at the end of the week so I won't be able to signficantly change my article).
I think you guys are write. I should actually have an opinion in the opinion section. I'll get off my confusing moderate high horse and choose one side. This happens to be very difficult for me since I like to play devil's advocate a lot. However, I do think I'm missing an edge to my writing and that's because I've been hiding my true opinions.
Experience is the best teacher. I can only get better by writing more :).
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Date: 2004-09-28 09:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-29 03:55 pm (UTC)