Are you writing for the editorial section or the news section?
See, this is all opinion. Opinions go in the opinion/editorial section... but the structure of your paper looks like this is just floating around in there, and that's sort of bad.
Either way, this reads more like an essay than a newspaper article... and you draw some strange conclusions. Most of them are all clearly your opinionated logic... they're not something that most people, namely those who disagree, can understand... when you're writing an opinion article, it helps to have logic other people can follow. Otherwise, it just sounds like you're saying stuff... that doesn't really make sense. And you are.
Of course, I disagree violently. I don't think that faith in a diety is important to a leader at all, but I do know that too many Americans do think that for someone crazy like me to get elected. And it annoys the hell out of me. The state of things in America, that is.
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Date: 2004-10-07 01:55 am (UTC)See, this is all opinion. Opinions go in the opinion/editorial section... but the structure of your paper looks like this is just floating around in there, and that's sort of bad.
Either way, this reads more like an essay than a newspaper article... and you draw some strange conclusions. Most of them are all clearly your opinionated logic... they're not something that most people, namely those who disagree, can understand... when you're writing an opinion article, it helps to have logic other people can follow. Otherwise, it just sounds like you're saying stuff... that doesn't really make sense. And you are.
Of course, I disagree violently. I don't think that faith in a diety is important to a leader at all, but I do know that too many Americans do think that for someone crazy like me to get elected. And it annoys the hell out of me. The state of things in America, that is.